A Knight of tales

An important person in my life. My father’s name is Carlos. He is tall and a little over weight. He has olive skin I think that it is because of the sun of the “pampa”, place where he gew up. My daddy has brown eyes with a special shine, his long eyelashes give to him the tenderness that is missing in his face. He went from a lush hair to an almost complete baldness, all this during his 48 years.

People’s first impression is that he is too serious, but in fact he is very kind, funny and vigorous.He has always worked in the mine for many years, since I was born, so I have seen he one week and the other no,  this has made him lose important occasions. My dad is a great man, a knight of tales which with his silver armor has managed defend and fight for his family. I admire and love him very much.

This paragraph was the most interesting and inspirational for me. I only had few grammar mistakes. When I knew that we have to write about a person, I inmediately thought in my father because I admire he very much. He has taught me many things such as to fishing, to fight for the things that I think that are right, to finish the things that I start. I love my father, I love him very much.